tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post2172499768280390906..comments2024-03-17T12:36:51.212-04:00Comments on Caitlyn's Masks: Please leave a MessageCaitlyn Maskedhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02732033913089350905noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-58918943258027393152013-02-04T03:31:06.711-05:002013-02-04T03:31:06.711-05:00Ummm...hi, Caitlyn...It's uhhh Jeff...uhmmm......Ummm...hi, Caitlyn...It's uhhh Jeff...uhmmm...I know that when you left me to sit your house for two weeks I told you I didn't drink coffee...It just smelled sooo good after you left...I...well, I totally love coffee after I tried a sip. The problem is that I ummm...you ran out, and I can't find your brand anywhere...I don't think I can get through the day without at least one cup #sob#...I'm just a wreck...please call me as soon as you get this...hugs, Jenna.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00838373813758766367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-13833661372825806232013-01-28T17:51:53.168-05:002013-01-28T17:51:53.168-05:00Thanks everybody!
After letting this stew for a...Thanks everybody! <br /><br />After letting this stew for a bit, I actually like it a little more. I'm still not happy with the layout, and agree with Kyra AND Jennifer... It would probably be better either without the repeated intro message, or as a three panel cap with the original graphic idea. Caitlyn Maskedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02732033913089350905noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-73967206267996341992013-01-28T15:41:18.396-05:002013-01-28T15:41:18.396-05:00I liked it, but I think it would have worked bette...I liked it, but I think it would have worked better with your original idea. This one worked, but felt a little sporadic. It was hard to feel what it would have been like for the girl caught in the middle of the husband and wife until the very end. <br /><br />It's not to say it wasn't enjoyable, because it was! I just think it would have zeroed in on that accidental transformation fantasy if it followed your first thoughts a bit more closely. Jenniferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08278508284141041193noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-21738613433722720752013-01-26T20:50:29.963-05:002013-01-26T20:50:29.963-05:00This is one very well done caption.This is one very well done caption.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00264655900013055987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-40716223887670643412013-01-26T17:01:15.967-05:002013-01-26T17:01:15.967-05:00Another great cap :)Another great cap :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-53520716552128142652013-01-26T16:33:37.270-05:002013-01-26T16:33:37.270-05:00Well worth all the effort. Enjoyed this caption.Well worth all the effort. Enjoyed this caption.Ianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11089075373700373443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-21971879646055327532013-01-26T01:35:23.981-05:002013-01-26T01:35:23.981-05:00A very clever bit of storytelling via the messages...A very clever bit of storytelling via the messages. You have done a really good job of fitting it all in while not overpowering the image that is its basis.Anne Oni Mousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13205375094515793111noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-3052287245923595572013-01-25T19:50:59.710-05:002013-01-25T19:50:59.710-05:00I can see why you had such a hard time with the ca...I can see why you had such a hard time with the cap! That is a high text to picture ratio. The final version looks good, if a little crowded. The earlier version though looks really cluttered. <br /><br />That being said, I think the story is really good! I like the narration device of the answering machine messages. Each one helps build into a truly devious and completely accidental trap for poor Calvin!<br /><br />I know it's most likely too late, but did you consider the messages being played back instead of recorded? I'm sure with all the wild rutting Calving and the plumber are doing, they might have hit the answering machine and it would cut down on the text by eliminating the repeating greeting. Just a thought ^_^Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com