tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post2906828340228154075..comments2024-03-17T12:36:51.212-04:00Comments on Caitlyn's Masks: ChauvinisticCaitlyn Maskedhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02732033913089350905noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-42976803854601682032011-12-30T09:50:17.539-05:002011-12-30T09:50:17.539-05:00@Alectra
Thank you for pointing that out. I know ...@Alectra<br />Thank you for pointing that out. I know exactly how I made that mistake. I had about half the story written, before deciding I needed at least one of the 'girls' to have a voice. Before that I had just left it as 'the girls of the secretarial pool'. So when I added Sheri in, I put it in after the 'the' and not before it. <br /><br />@Dee<br />I briefly considered tilting the text boxes. But I don't like how the text lines up when it is like that. I could tilt the text as well, but then I am forcing my reader to cock her head to the side to read it. And unless there is a reason, I don't like making them harder to read. <br /><br />But thanks for the suggestion, and the compliment.Caitlyn Maskedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02732033913089350905noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-52233545816886162432011-12-30T09:28:07.886-05:002011-12-30T09:28:07.886-05:00The completed version does look more "Caitlyn...The completed version does look more "Caitlyn" than the other one, which is designed more in a Petra sort of style. <br /><br />If you had continued with the first style, perhaps flipping the picture around and doing two angled text boxes so that mostly just the secretary is shown, and cover everything that isn't her, might have worked, but I think there was just too much text to work with in that style. You made a good choice in using "Classic Caitlyn" mode to present this caption!Dee Mentiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07798903090538917010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-89162226130359881802011-12-30T05:01:32.853-05:002011-12-30T05:01:32.853-05:00Nice Caitlyn go show them what you can do! Those c...Nice Caitlyn go show them what you can do! Those chauvinistic bossess won't hold their ground with you around. *giggle*<br /><br />There is a little tiny error you made and that's right on the start of your story.<br /><br />When "the" Sheri and the girls... be careful with that, unless you specifically wanted to use the article there to sound like a poor skilled conversationalist (Which I won't believe it!), it shouldn't be there at all!<br /><br />Hugs and Kisses AlectraAlectrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05098726295590695381noreply@blogger.com