tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post4797934134473689969..comments2024-03-17T12:36:51.212-04:00Comments on Caitlyn's Masks: Numbers GameCaitlyn Maskedhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02732033913089350905noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-26459806859608947452011-10-13T00:08:48.073-04:002011-10-13T00:08:48.073-04:00@ Alectra
Oh I wasn't throwing any rocks swee...@ Alectra<br /><br />Oh I wasn't throwing any rocks sweetie, I just didn't see any reason to expand on the story in the cap. It was meant to capture the imagination, and it did that for me. ^_^Jenniferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08278508284141041193noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-88525333899871500062011-10-12T16:09:50.090-04:002011-10-12T16:09:50.090-04:00First off, thank you Geofrey, Alectra, Anonymous, ...First off, thank you Geofrey, Alectra, Anonymous, and Jennifer, for your kind comments. <br /><br />@Alectra<br />Thanks for the comment and critique. While I still prefer what I did, as opposed to what you suggested, I do like to hear what others think. Especially in areas that I am not well versed in. And I am certainly not well versed in this style of cap. <br /><br />I didn't think of this as JUST a way to write less words. To me, this was more of setting up a scene, and letting you (the reader) get a little squirm out of it. It let the reader fill in all the details that I generally love. Who is this Master? Is this taking place in his basement? In a lab? In a school? Is the Master doing the hypnosis? What surgeries were involved?<br /><br />I normally wouldn't mention any of these things, unless I could explain them. But in this style, it is more of just setting the scene, and letting the reader's imagination take over. I'm with you though... I prefer to write out the whole story. Sure, I'd probably lose about half the people that like this, as my details wouldn't match up favorably with the details they thought of. I did feel that I could add more... I just thought that if I went down that road, I could keep adding until I was over 1000 words. So... short is what I wanted, and short is what I got. <br /><br />@Jennifer<br />Thanks... I love that line 'Sometimes what is not said speaks the loudest'. I normally don't write that way, and this is a nice step to try it out some. <br /><br />@Alectra<br />No rocks being thrown at all. I love your critique, and really appreciate your suggestions, and a little (or a lot!) criticism is always appreciated!Caitlyn Maskedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02732033913089350905noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-63357592527343190062011-10-12T14:16:09.619-04:002011-10-12T14:16:09.619-04:00Hey don't throw me rocks! "giggle". ...Hey don't throw me rocks! "giggle". I was just pointing out a suggestion. Of course Cait did a great job but, a little criticism shouldn't do anything wrong right? RIGHT?! "giggle"<br /><br />Hugs and Kisses AlectraAlectrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03568780951812037124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-67979711400313802892011-10-11T19:49:29.186-04:002011-10-11T19:49:29.186-04:00I agree with anonyoums, I don't think anything...I agree with anonyoums, I don't think anything should be changed. You did a fantastic job with what you set out to do and I didn't feel like you left anything out. You left a lot up to the imagination, but that's part of the appeal to this sort of caption. <br /><br />Some times what's not said speaks the loudest. In this case my eardrums are set to burst! Great work Sweetie! I love seeing you step out of your comfort zone like this, everyone wins!Jenniferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08278508284141041193noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-14023702465246767482011-10-10T08:25:46.347-04:002011-10-10T08:25:46.347-04:00I love this one so much just as it is, fantastic!I love this one so much just as it is, fantastic!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-83362567526802036992011-10-09T18:03:06.827-04:002011-10-09T18:03:06.827-04:00Damn Cait you just keep stealing the fun of every ...Damn Cait you just keep stealing the fun of every capper nowadays "giggle". I think you did a nice job with this one trying to "economize words" but then again you left sooooooooooooo much to the imagination as you always tend, to fill on the gaps, so I was a bit confused at the end.<br /><br />First the image is fantastic and I think it leaves less to the imagination but!!!!, the story is just like a moment of a bigger one.<br /><br />I personally like to crunch on the whole story...<br /><br />For the story you told...<br /><br />The how but not the why and where and who.<br /><br />I certainly don't care about the who but I think that in that little story you could have added some words to clarify that and even remove some.<br /><br />1 night to capture me while I was asleep or maybe 1 night to forbid my past.<br /><br />Then the lips and the surgery part can be left aside if you add the sissy part and then...<br /><br />The cum still fresh in my mouth or maybe the bitterness running down my lips<br /><br />25 days to make me change (you can add many references in that sentence from heels to mannerism and such)<br /><br />99 days to comply...<br /><br />1 day to accept my Caitlyn side or maybe 1 day to accept my true side<br /><br />and finally<br /><br />And only 143 facials to accept my master's pride<br /><br />So we are left with<br /><br />1 night to forbid my past<br />the bitterness running down my lips<br />25 days to make me change<br />99 days to comply...<br />1 day to accept my true side<br /><br />And only 143 facials to accept my master's pride<br /><br />Of course is just a suggestion since you asked for them in later posts ^-^<br /><br />Keep up experimenting Cait!<br /><br />Hugs and Kisses Alectra<br /><br />P.S: I did liked the last mietje whatever "giggle" cap but I didn't have the time to respond to that one.Alectrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03568780951812037124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-26984274479548936142011-10-09T17:16:54.283-04:002011-10-09T17:16:54.283-04:00I liked it too.I liked it too.Geofreyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18259509067119405992noreply@blogger.com