tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post5725142300822101038..comments2024-03-17T12:36:51.212-04:00Comments on Caitlyn's Masks: Never Trust Black Market NanobotsCaitlyn Maskedhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02732033913089350905noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-34056840654344666312011-05-28T02:30:39.011-04:002011-05-28T02:30:39.011-04:00I really enjoyed the faulty nanobots angle. It was...I really enjoyed the faulty nanobots angle. It was dark enough for me and forced enough to really get me going and push my buttons. I loved the final draft for this It used the nano's In a way you don't see very often and just added so much to the story that I fell in lust for! ^_^<br /><br />But the first one didn't seem that dark besides the fact she didn't care about who the person was before. But for me, I like it really dark so you could have played off of that and it would have been great to me. But I'm really glad you did scrap it in the end, because it seemed kind of generic in the way she described maemi's new body and situation. Nothing at all like the very refreshing, sexy and innovative caption it became. <br /><br />And i noticed it says you will love half your strength, when I'm guessing it's supposed to say you will lose half your strength. I don't know why she's upset about her the predicament though, sounds like the sort of thing's i would be asking for! *giggle*Jenniferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08278508284141041193noreply@blogger.com