tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post723513221949828925..comments2024-03-17T12:36:51.212-04:00Comments on Caitlyn's Masks: Evie's FantasyCaitlyn Maskedhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02732033913089350905noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-15611795674743484632012-12-29T08:48:32.275-05:002012-12-29T08:48:32.275-05:00Sorry Lara, both youtube and dailymotion took the ...Sorry Lara, both youtube and dailymotion took the videos down. As of right now the only place to see this video is in my gallery at DX. Caitlyn Maskedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02732033913089350905noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-58425837116855689182012-12-28T21:38:29.696-05:002012-12-28T21:38:29.696-05:00I cant find the video on daily motionI cant find the video on daily motionMsLaraYveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05881355656469578913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-80758625392992004082012-05-20T23:24:54.830-04:002012-05-20T23:24:54.830-04:00Wow, that was fantastically sexy.Wow, that was fantastically sexy.Neorotoxinhttp://www.rachelshaven.com/index.php?option=com_smf&Itemid=41&board=637.0noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-21968854969387235502012-05-01T11:03:16.865-04:002012-05-01T11:03:16.865-04:00WOW!!I absolutely loved it!!So powerful and beauti...WOW!!I absolutely loved it!!So powerful and beautiful,truly amazing.I am humbled by your story telling with these images.This story is truly unique in it's delivery and a joy to see.Thank you ever so much for sharing it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-13046329666995142132012-04-30T15:29:26.446-04:002012-04-30T15:29:26.446-04:00Wow, I don't really know what to say, it's...Wow, I don't really know what to say, it's so beautiful! The imagery is so evocative, the emotion and the depth of the series is amazing. I love the story and the development of it, the use of the font and the images chosen... amazing.<br /><br />I'm abashed that anyone would ever make me something so purely and sincerely beautiful, thank you I'm honoured and enraptured by this series in equal part. You are truly astounding Caitlyn...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-12566583906864953352012-04-29T23:08:58.971-04:002012-04-29T23:08:58.971-04:00I appreciate that Annabelle. Although that is all...I appreciate that Annabelle. Although that is all the same font. Its 'Effloresce' in italics and several sizes (and one point bold as well). I assume that's what you meant... the variety of sizes.Caitlyn Maskedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02732033913089350905noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-13904417077971236922012-04-29T23:06:10.204-04:002012-04-29T23:06:10.204-04:00I wish I could say I was going after a mood. But ...I wish I could say I was going after a mood. But since I was writing this just one panel at a time, I didn't have an arc and therefore wasn't trying to dictate a particular mood. You know me... I'm generally not going for a 'happy' ending. So it doesn't surprise me that you got this feeling of stalking from it. When I read it in full, I get a desperate mad love out of it. Adam has become Evie, and now just desperately wants his/her girlfriend to love her as much. <br /><br />The music I picked (and since it's no longer up the music was Rob Dougan's "Instrumental" from the Furious Angels album) played a bit on that. Sad, slow, building, trying to convince a sane person that you are in fact not mad, and that they MUST love you back. <br /><br />When I saw those last pictures I didn't originally intend to use them. But I felt that Evie was convincing the girlfriend to much, so it seemed to fit that the girlfriend would run away. Those pictures matched that. I'd say the 'real' ending comes about 4 panels later. Does the girl friend come back and accept Evie as she now is, or does Evie go fully mad and start stalking her. It's up to the reader.Caitlyn Maskedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02732033913089350905noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-79501860764081295292012-04-29T22:59:15.323-04:002012-04-29T22:59:15.323-04:00Yea, sorry about that Kyra. Don't know what c...Yea, sorry about that Kyra. Don't know what came over me!Caitlyn Maskedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02732033913089350905noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-51550787900808190912012-04-29T21:55:38.901-04:002012-04-29T21:55:38.901-04:00Mistake or not, I'm going to take being called...Mistake or not, I'm going to take being called Evie as a compliment ;)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-89991201247750442122012-04-29T14:02:38.399-04:002012-04-29T14:02:38.399-04:00Evie said on her blog a week ago she would be gone...Evie said on her blog a week ago she would be gone a "fortnight" So I believe she'll be back in half a fortnight - a halfnight - a forthalf? (I'm a silly Yank) :pAnnabelle Ravenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04955409534230066689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-26687108452321967282012-04-29T14:00:32.842-04:002012-04-29T14:00:32.842-04:00The use of the various fonts did an amazing thing;...The use of the various fonts did an amazing thing; it was like a 3D vibe to the story. Bravo, you just set the bar that much higher for the rest of us, Caitlyn. :)Annabelle Ravenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04955409534230066689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-85124717667438697422012-04-29T12:46:36.998-04:002012-04-29T12:46:36.998-04:00The visual side, as in the integration of the text...The visual side, as in the integration of the text into the photo was so well done, it feels like a story pictorial in a fantasy magazine. The word collage in panel 11 was genius. Its one of your best series to date.<br /><br />I am not sure what mood you were going for though. To me, if you were going for a happy ending, it should've ended on panel 16 .. "you're getting turned on my me!" From there, it seems like it turned from a charming "see what you awoke in me" feel into an almost 'the change pushed Evie over the brink" mentality where love turns into obsession. By the last panel, I got the impression that Evie's girlfriend was fleeing in fear, and that Evie was about to become a stalker.<br /><br />The music in the video matched well until the ending, where all I was thinking was "Every Breath You Take" by The Police. Most people have fond thoughts of the song (and people have even used it as a wedding song!) but it has quite a few different meanings, and one is of a stalker. The beautiful music belies the underneath single-natured focus the singer has one his object of affection .. and I see the same thing in this caption series, an artistic tour-de-force with am intense, creepy vibe.<br /><br />Perhaps this is just the way my mind works, but its how I saw this stunning work play out as I was reading it. What was your original intent for this, to make it a happy ending, or have a darker feel that would unsettle the reader as it went along?Dee Mentiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07798903090538917010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-20412207853468582902012-04-29T10:41:27.020-04:002012-04-29T10:41:27.020-04:00I couldn't agree more. That is a stunningly lo...I couldn't agree more. That is a stunningly lovely piece of work. That is not a caption story it is a work of art.Anne Oni Mousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13205375094515793111noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-16946948998374870732012-04-29T09:24:32.373-04:002012-04-29T09:24:32.373-04:00She's Kyra... you missed her name Caitlyn :3
E...She's Kyra... you missed her name Caitlyn :3<br />Evie's out, but I'm sure she'll come like a moth to the flame to comment this soon :D<br /><br />Hugs and Kisses AlectraAlectrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05098726295590695381noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-76349066416974336922012-04-29T08:53:32.823-04:002012-04-29T08:53:32.823-04:00Thank you Evie. I'm glad that the music helpe...Thank you Evie. I'm glad that the music helped frame the emotions. To be honest I was letting the process of making it into a video guide me, and after I published it I started to worry if the music was a bad idea. It matched the emotions I wanted the reader to feel, but I'm afraid that its dictating those feelings instead of letting the reader put their own tone into it. If someone read this as more playful, then the music wouldn't go along with that at all.Caitlyn Maskedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02732033913089350905noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-35936426561802622592012-04-29T08:50:15.380-04:002012-04-29T08:50:15.380-04:00Thank you Simone. Such praise coming from you mea...Thank you Simone. Such praise coming from you means a lot. I often struggle with letting 'negative space' sit unused. I don't know if I would consider making it into a video as 'taking it to the next level'. Its really just a slideshow so that the reader can sit back and read it like a normal caption and not have to keep clicking.Caitlyn Maskedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02732033913089350905noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-24783788892991661872012-04-29T08:45:32.606-04:002012-04-29T08:45:32.606-04:00It wasn't my intention to write this so that i...It wasn't my intention to write this so that it could be read in a random order. While I didn't exactly have a story arch to begin with, I did let it have a peak and an ending. I'm sure it differs the story though. I just don't know if I'm happy about that or upset. I don't know if that says its good writing or bad. <br /><br />As to my impulses, this wasn't a Calvin/Caitlyn issue. It was a writing issue. When I accepted that I would write this way, I had in mind a 'short' story. I know, I know, its short as is writing wise, but the whole cap is long (considering that I'm letting the pictures tell quite a bit of the story. I guess you could say that its more of an issue of not knowing the ending. I didn't even intend on using those last two images as they didn't 'fit' the rest of the images. And normally when I don't know where the story is going to end it meanders and wanders around in an unsatisfying way. <br /><br />Heh... the only thing I meant by putting the 'clean' label on was that I didn't really talk about sex in the cap. I only mentioned them making love once, and mentioned the girlfriend getting wet once. I would put a 'rating' on this of PG--13, or maybe a soft R (full nudity tends to get that).Caitlyn Maskedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02732033913089350905noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-45364169029412073162012-04-29T01:57:55.657-04:002012-04-29T01:57:55.657-04:00I'm.. I'm speechless. The captions on the...I'm.. I'm speechless. The captions on there own are absolutely fantastic, and when they're added to music in the video. It's all so beautiful. The emotions you've captured so simply and perfectly, the love, the anger, Evie's playful naughtiness. I really don't think I can say anymore, because I don't have the words for itAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-12596980861286105502012-04-28T21:40:20.830-04:002012-04-28T21:40:20.830-04:00Once again, you go to the next level with everythi...Once again, you go to the next level with everything you do!<br /><br />The kinetic style of text makes this really pop visually. Instead of overloading the space with a ton of text, you made it as much apart of the image as the model. This is fantastic visual work. That alone would have been amazing. However you took to the next level and turned it into a video. I just don't see how I could keep up. Bravo.Mistress Simonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03830472323307586514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3638398317329574756.post-114113875721601882012-04-28T18:03:00.624-04:002012-04-28T18:03:00.624-04:00Welcome to my world Caitlyn. I normally write the ...Welcome to my world Caitlyn. I normally write the text in the image and I let the story flow wherever its wants... so this happen, you felt the sensation of an engrossing story inside of your head. That sensation you think Ouh this is absolutely ridiculous but it shows bit after bit. <br /><br />I don't know if it was your intention to put the story from any panel, but I read mixing panels and thanks to your "opened writing" It can differ the story in many, many directions. Just try and you'll know what I'm telling you ;)<br /><br />I must say that you need to let your impulses get over you from time to time and let Caitlyn come out and play. This is clearly as you stated a part of irrational thinking where your Calvin part want to stop but Caitlyn says: Ouh this is juicy, just let me pour a bit more, just a bit more and you end up with such a friggin' awesome story. Well done Caitlyn.<br /><br />Storytelling is not based on huge walls of text its based on emotions. And here there are true huge emotions coming out to play! Of course the sexy babe adds to the play, but my main focus and thrill is in your words accompanied by a marvelous match of each panel.<br /><br />And I'll stop the praising because by know you are clearly red :3<br /><br />Just a tiny slang: You say clean but ouh well, you left my mind thinking dirty things about Evie. It's my sis you know! *giggle*<br /><br />Hugs and Kisses AlectraAlectrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05098726295590695381noreply@blogger.com