Tuesday, August 7, 2012

Learning to be a Real Man

These lessons are always hard, but oh so worth it!

So this is a return for Realfield (Candy) over at the Haven.  Once she came back from retirement, she made me several great caps, but that was just about the time that I had a heap of debt and had slowed down my capping.  Thankfully I've worked toward her caps and have now started to pay her back.

As you know from my previous caps for Candy, she loves having a strong Alpha Male involuntarily transform her into a sweet submissive girl or shemale.  This type of cap is right up my alley as I can easily slip into this mindset.  The more I shiver and quiver while I write, the more I know Candy will enjoy it.

Writing this story went very smoothly.  Sure, I had to cut out about 1/4 of what I wrote, but doing so really tightened the story up a lot.  And that's just because I tend to write far more than needed when I get into this type of story.  I'm sure that will be a benefit if I ever decide to write out a full fledged story, but for caps, there is just to many size requirements.

Thankfully my playing around with text layouts in "Proving My Devotion" has now paid dividends.  I initially tried to cut this story down enough so that I could fit it into one panel on the right.... but I went beyond trimming the fat and onto cutting into bone when I did so.  So instead of increasing the canvas size, I opted to use the free space up top and extend the text box over.  And honestly, this went far smoother than I thought it would.

About the only thing, design wise, that I'm not happy with, is how close the text box is to the girl's nose.  I'd like about 5 or 10 more pixels separating them.  But cutting down on the text box that much would have required further edits... so I left it as is.

Hope you enjoy it at least half as much as I did making it!

11 comments:

  1. Wow..... Just "Wow"... So Artistic and erotic.

    THANK you!

    Britney

    http://britneytgcaps.blogspot.de/

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  2. Hawt and dirty, mmmmh. You know, caps like this make me wanna learn to be a real dirty sissy bitch... mmmmh.

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  3. I probably wouldn't have paid a second thought to that darn text box if you hadn't mentioned it >.<

    Great cap, it looks like you might be getting back into your groove pretty fast.

    Jane

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    1. Hee Hee... sorry about mentioning that Jane. I do these writeups as a steam of consciousness, and that as on my mind as it really bothered me.

      As for my groove... well, we'll see. My 'groove' over the past few months is to put out between 3 and 5 caps each week. I hope to keep up that level!

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  4. Caitlyn, the best caps make you wish you could jump right in and interact. In my case, I'd like to be stage right ;)

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  5. Such a lovely gift. Your work never fails to impress. The graphic layout, picture choices and the super hot writing. This one is so hot, hot, HOT.
    ...would love to read the "deleted scenes" ;-)

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    1. I'd love to show the 'deleted scenes' but I was editing the word file on the fly... so I didn't copy out what I deleted. The majority of the story is still there, as most of the changes were in the way something was phrased. One part that I do recall completely shelving is talking more about her reaction after the breast enhancement surgery. It was fun, but didn't add a lot to the story.

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  6. This is one of the best written and hottest sissy transformation caps I've read in a long time. The progression flows really smoothly while advancing the plot, all without losing the eroticism that is usually reserved for single scene stories.

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    1. Thanks Rauk. When I write this type of cap I'm often trying to make it 'hot', but I'm surprised when it comes across as well written. It means a lot to me to hear that!

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  7. I gotta admit, I most likely don't have what it takes to be a real man. But I still feel its important ti learn what a real man is. I know it won't be easy, the lessons will be hard, and sometimes painful. But after many long hours bent over a desk I feel I can learn what it takes to be truly masculine an where I stand (or rather kneel) in comparison.

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  8. Ohh! The kind of training I love AND a sexy maid story?! Perfect! I've really been into the whole french maid stuff lately and the training is just the back bone to some of my favorite tg tales. This was great!

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