Thursday, November 8, 2012

All we need is Love

Love is all we need


I've had this idea rumbling around my mind for quite some time.  I think the gist of the story came from parts of Pansy Pond by Timothy Reisling Betticut.  I read the story years and years ago, but it stuck with me long enough so that when I started capping it was still there.  The idea at its most basic is being not only being transformed, but made to love someone that is being transformed right along with you.

When I went perusing images this morning and saw this set... specifically the image in the first panel... I knew I should give this a try.  I think the expressions on the women's faces are perfect.  A mixture of both lust and reluctance.  When I started writing it came fairly easily.  That is until I tried to make it more sexual.  One of the scenes I wanted to replicate from Pansy Pond was the sleeping arrangement's   It's a very hot part of the story... the 'girl' has to dress up each other in a sexy outfit, then they're tied to each other in bed.  In the 69 position.  With their cocks in each other's mouth.  All they could see, smell and feel is a woman dressed up provocatively pressed up against them with her lips wrapped around his cock.  So naturally they get aroused, growing into each others mouths.  To me that's almost a perfect example of "yes Yes YES!!! no No NOOO!!"

But when I tried to write that into the story... well it felt wrong.  It's part of whats been bothering me for the past month or so... I was turned on by it, but being turned on by it seemed wrong.  So... I had to take it out. and to be honest, I think the story is better because of it.  Sure, it's not quite as squirmy and hot, but it lets the story focus more on the emotional side.  Instead of focusing on lust and reluctance, I could focus on love and reluctance.  Sensuality instead of sexuality.

A funny side story... after the trouble I had titling "Sealed With a Kiss", I tried to make sure that the title wasn't one I had used before.  About halfway into the story I figured the title should be "Can't Buy Me Love"... they were there thinking of buying someone to love and ended up being made to love each other for 'free' after all.  I checked, and I haven't written a cap with that as a title. So I pulled up that song and threw in some other Beatles songs to play while I finished writing.   When I finished writing the story, I realized I had actually used the lyrics from "All you need is love".  Well hey... that would make a fine title as well.  So I worked on the title, and even added the extra tag lone 'Love is all you need'.... and then found out that I do in fact already have a cap titled "All you need is love"

DAMNIT!!!

Thankfully it wasn't to much of a stretch to change it to "All WE need is love".  It still fits just fine... maybe more so.

Oh... and since I was writing about an already existing friendship, I figured making the stars Jennifer and myself worked perfectly.  My apologies though as I don't normally depict Jennifer as a blonde.

10 comments:

  1. This is a sweltering one. Seemingly soft and sweet but with such nasty implications. After all, the whole point of the transformation is to sell them to some man that wants a pair of lovebird sissies and I doubt he'll be as gentle.

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    1. Thanks smitty. I honestly hadn't looked forward to what their training and sale would lead too, but yes I can see that adding some extra steam to the cap.

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  2. A great idea two men being made into each others ideal girl.
    Ian

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    1. Thank you Ian. I thought it might make a fun cap. I only wish I could take this and make a more fully fleshed out story.

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  3. Very twisted, and very sexy. Great caption.

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    1. Thanks Rauk! I think any time that Love is used against someone, that it's a fun twist!

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  4. Mmmm a sweet and sentimental story of shotgun seduction! Simply scintillating :) I surely must sneak into a secret, sissy sex club!

    (Okay, some words were a bit stretched, but think of the alliteration!))

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  5. *gasp* I could have swore that I had commented on this!

    I absolutely adore this caption! The scene you cut does sound very sexy, but focusing on the emotional side and the tiny details like you did, it made it sink in a little deeper I think.

    I love how they are made to clean each other, sleep with each other, and even feed each other as teasingly erotically as possible! I can completely buy the confusion of fallen in love with the image of your perfect woman. Not to mention, the perfect escape for what's being done to you, as well.

    And the way we ended up in this situation? Oh my god! yes! I thought that was just perfect, being kept for their own needs just because they weren't any one special? A couple of curious, broke men, who would make more money as a couple of frustrated sissy's. I loved it! ^_^

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