Are you sure baby?
Every piece of me you seen has transformed you into it’s twin. Your beautifully feminine face, your luscious
pert breasts, your smooth sensitive skin… but you still have your manhood between
those shapely thighs. Are you sure you
want to see underneath my panties?
source: fuskator
(The original... it stalled, so I rewrote the above version instead)
She walked up behind me and covered my eyes. She whispered unusual things to me. Saying that if I saw her, I’d grow to be like
her. But her voice was
intoxicating. I had to see who this
playful girl was. When I turned around
and saw her long golden hair, I felt my own hair flow down past my
shoulders. When I saw her full painted
lips, I felt mine plump up and push out.
When I saw her button nose I felt my own schnoz shrink down. As shocked as I was, I was still surprised
that when I saw her smile… I felt my own smile spread across my now cute
feminine face.
She took me to her apartment.....
I like the second version. It leaves more to the reader to complete.
ReplyDeleteI agree. The second (non original) version is designed to stand alone. The original would have been one of my more standard stories... sadly the train came off the rails and I couldn't finish it.
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