Fuck Me, Love Me, Marry Me

Word selection is just so important!

So I haven't been feeling very cappy lately.  Well.. that's not quite right.  I've wanted to make a cap but my mind has been pulled in so many directions that I can't seem to concentrate on writing out a good story.  Today I decided that I would just make a quick fun cap... just to get me back on the rails.  When I saw this image set I loved how her tattoos looked.  Cure, funny, and just a little home made.

So I sat down to write. This wasn't going to be for anyone in particular as I had no idea if it would be any good. And after writing the first draft, I almost just dumped it all.  The story came easy enough, but the ending just didn't match the setup. It felt like I was telling the story of a baseball game and ended up with a plane crash... it just didn't match.  Thankfully I gave it another swing.  This version of the story didn't come as easily, but at least it makes a good progression.

Here's what I wrote on the first swing:

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My darling sweet wife has always been so smart and willing to please me, but at the same time she can sometimes be so literal.  When I told her that I loved her and that she needed to love me, she wouldn't believe it until I had it tattooed on myself.  The same was true when I asked her to marry me.  For years I've worn those two tattoos just below my waistline.  Something that only she would see.

So I was curious when she sent me to the tattoo parlor to prove that I truly wanted us to have sex.  I mean, we've been having sex for years now.  Maybe it was just the language I used... she confided to me that she wanted some more dirty talk in the bedroom, so I told her that I wanted her to fuck me.   When I got back and showed her my new tat she just clucked her tongue and injected me with something.

And now here we are.  It's been a year and many surgeries since I got that tattoo.  Whenever I tried to protest she just smiled and promised to follow what I REALLY wanted.  As I slide up my new pretty pink panties I'll have to make sure to cover up only the last tattoo.  I want the man that my wife has brought home to love me and fuck me... just not to marry me!
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I'm overall pretty happy with the cap.  Laying out the text looked like it would be a problem, but selecting the area between the girls stockings and using that selection to color in the text worked out easy enough.

Hope ya like it, and more importantly I hope it spurs me on to do something better.