Friday, December 30, 2011

Devious Wicked Plots

Those Bastards!

I'm sure this idea has been done before, but I think its my first swing at it.  My initial thought was what if you combined my TG fantasies, with my idealized real world?  My TG fantasy of being forcibly feminized, and having to live through humiliation after humiliation, and my idealized world where everyone tries their best to accept everyone as they are.

This is obviously outside of my wheelhouse, as I don't often use such overt humor.  But even if no one else gets a kick out of this, I just kept sending myself into a giggle fit as I wrote 'Master Lawrence and Mistress Deborahs' parts.

Design wise, I was in a bit of a conundrum.  I quickly found and fell in love with this image.  And the story only took about 10-20 minutes to write.  But I had two very distinct areas of the story to work with.  I wanted to make sure everyone read Caitlyn's part first.  Not just because its the first part of the story, but it should lead people (especially those that regularly read my caps) into thinking that this is a regular cap for me.

But the image doesn't really lend itself to this split style.  I didn't crop this image at all, and her face is off center, leaving less room on one side.  I honestly didn't want to have Caitlyn's text so close, but having the text box longer (and therefore thinner.. farther from her face) didn't look right.  As is, it bothers me that the text boxes for Caitlyn, and her devious owners are different widths.  But its a compromise I'm willing to live with, as I think it lays the story out the way I want it.

3 comments:

  1. Caitlyn,

    I think you did a marvelous job, especially with the dialogue :)

    The picture is perfect, as always... as for the layout, sometimes, you do the best you can.. The difference in size is a little noticeable, but doesn't detract from the overall aesthetics..

    Personally, I LOVE it :) I love the story, love the pic, and love the color scheme/layout..

    Well done!
    Steffimariechen's Forced Femme Caption Blog

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  2. Hmmm, I think Debbie seems to be taking a shine to lil Caitlyn .. Larry better look out or he might be next in the snare! LOL

    I LOVE this caption! It has that offbeat sensibility that I love to read, and turns conventional TG affectations on its head.

    Funny that it stars "Calvin" since I could see this as an adult version of "Calvin and Hobbes" .. and this is the grown up variety of Spaceman Spiff.

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  3. Love it...hilarious story, sexy pic and oh how I love purple. :)

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