Thursday, June 21, 2012

Should have bought a dyson

Dyson's certainly wouldn't do this!

So my mind is still preoccupied with getting the test results.  I may get them today, but it wouldn't be unheard of to take until tomorrow either.  I know I should focus on other things as at this point it's just a waiting game.  There is nothing I can do to make this go faster.

But no matter what I do, I keep thinking that maybe they've been posted.  I can't stop myself from heading over to the site and checking.  I do that about every hour.

So to get my mind off of it, I decided to make a cap.  I knew I wasn't focued enough to make a good cap for smitty, googs, or candy (all of whom I owe caps too), so I just flicked through fuskator for something to inspire me.  In all honesty I expected to find a sexy bj pic and make a quick and dirty cap.  But when I saw Alison Angel here with her trusty vacuum, I got this quick story idea.

I think the idea behind the story is sound, and might even make a good cap.  But even capping I couldn't keep my mind from going back to the test results.  In fact as time seems to fly by while I'm capping it actually got worse.  I checked for results three times while making this cap (it only took me an hour to make it even with those interruptions). As a result, the writing is... well its bad.  It's not focused enough and could use a thorough edit if not a complete re-write.

But seeing as this would never be one of my favorites, and that I can't do that now, I decided to go ahead and post it as is.  I mean Alison sure is cute, regardless of the story!


  1. I actually think its pretty good. Not in your top echelon of captions, but its designed well, tells the story, and then gives a little zinger at the end. You also found a perfect spot for your little watermark!

  2. Well blow me! Tee hee. I like this one actually, I think it's pretty hot. You're getting as bad as me for self hating captions that everyone else thinks are good!

    1. Oh I don't know about that Evie. I've been self hating my own captions since just after I began making them!

  3. Nice. Makes for a nice twist. Then there's all that nasty sucking he'll have to do until he gets his head on straight... if ever.

  4. I think its a great Cap Caitlyn. I wish I could make a cap this good and think its crap. By the way... need any cleaning done at your place? *giggles*

  5. Score another one for Caitlyn's impossibly high self-imposed "standards"...

    I'll echo/paraphrase the sentiment, with "emphasis"... I WISH I could create a caption THIS GOOD, and still feel it was "bad"...