Saturday, April 7, 2012

Life's A Beach

...and then you get turned into a bimbo!

So I'm still playing around with the idea of 'clean' caps.  I didn't start out with the idea to make a clean cap, instead I was just perusing some pictures to see if anything sparked an idea.  When I saw this pic, the general idea of this story came to me.  A guy lying on the beach, minding his own business when a couple walks up and starts arguing about what makes a woman attractive, while the guy changes in front of them.

I thought the idea was worth exploring, and normally I would then look for some sort of XXX picture on a beach to see if I could write it.  But as I still have clean caps moving around in my head, I thought I would give this a swing without the XXX.

The story started off fine, but like most clean caps I just didn't feel myself really getting into it.  So I changed it up from the couple talking about what an attractive woman would be, to what it would take in a woman for him to screw her.   Not quite as clean, but not XXX or even NC-17.  More of a hard R.

That got me through to the end of the story.  I'm not sure if its all that good though.... I think its kind of funny, and an interesting idea, but I think it would have been better if it was smuttier.  I can almost hear the guy's internal dialog starting to argue with himself.... 'Mmmm... this cock is just so yummy... GAH!! No Its NOT!"


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4 comments:

  1. AlectraApril 7, 2012 at 11:56 AM

    *Gasp* A tiny typo crumbling this piece of art! "impornat" go to hell you bad typo *giggle*

    Funny caption Caitlyn I love that line of "well she would have to have a pretty face and a pussy instead of a cock". (Let's go shemale if not!) :D

    Hugs and Kisses Alectra

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    1. Caitlyn MaskedApril 9, 2012 at 7:43 AM

      Hey, if you can only find one typo per cap, then I think I'm doing a wonderful job!

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  2. AnonymousApril 7, 2012 at 12:17 PM

    I think it came out really well! I love the concept and its pretty funny too! Probably be rated more of a soft R though. I mean there's no violence and only some suggestive language.

    I find it peculiar how the wife is so incensed about the prospect of her husband cheating on her (which I agree is horrible), but seems to have no qualms with turning an average Joe into a sexy bimbo and then leaving him like that.

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    1. Caitlyn MaskedApril 9, 2012 at 7:48 AM

      You're probably right in that this would be a soft R, or even PG-13 as they are just talking about sex. The way I wrote the wife in my mind was how some people get so self involved in their righteousness, that they don't see how they are running over other people. She's so focused on her husbands infidelity that it never crosses her mind that what she is doing to this poor guy could be worse.

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