Don't

Some friendly advice

So I've had this image banging around in my head for a few days now.  When I originally found it, I thought it was pretty damned sexy and would make a fun cap.  But at the time I just wasn't in that big of a capping mood.  It was buried in a gallery of unrelated images and I was afraid that I wouldn't be able to find it again so I went ahead and saved it.

But over the past few days, I never got a really good idea out of it.  I mean the action speaks for itself... a guy dressed up like a woman (or a guy recently transformed into a woman) is joining his girlfriend and another woman in pleasing a man.  I focused the attention on the girl kissing the balls because hers is the only eyes you can see.

But the problem with the image speaking for itself is that the only story I can really tell is the build up to that moment.  And with nothing else in the photo to work off of (no clothes, no background, no trinkets...) anything I wrote felt like it didn't fit, or that it didn't belong with this image.

This morning I took another pass at it but it came out the same.  Instead of deleting it, I tried to make one more try.  But this time I would give almost no details... jsut set up the facts as to how the guy got there.  I wrote out the first line more or less as is, figuring I would base the story on the girlfriend's wicked attempt at proving to her boyfriend that there are bigger cocks out there.  But when I sat back and tried to think of how she got him from point A to point B (Get it?  Point B?  Point Balls?  ah nevermind...) I started thinking of their conversation instead of action points.

I then realized that I could carry the action in the same way I did the first sentence.  Explain something she said, and give the advice of what NOT to say or do.  The rest of the 'story' came pretty easily after that.  Sliding it into the photo was easy enough, although I'm not happy with all the empty space it gives.  I knew that it wasn't all that good, just a fun little 'story' with an uber sexy photo, so I didn't over think it.  I left it the text as it was, and saved it.

Is it good?  It might JUST barely meet the definition of good.

Is it great?  No.  Absolutely not.

Is it good enough?  Well that's up to you.  I think it's good enough to post and not throw away, but only you can say if it's good enough to warrant your time.