A Threesome?

My first cap involving a woman changing into a shemale

This is still an early cap.  I had made caps for two members at the Haven, and instead of writing another 'out of thin air' cap, I decided to pick someone else to cap for.  As I still didn't know anyone at the Haven, I decided to pick someone who welcomed me in; Vicki.  It really helps that I find that name Vicki to be sexy.  Then I found something that I hadn't even considered.... Vicki is a female.  Not a woman trapped in a man's body, not a post op special..... a woman.  Her preferences indicated she enjoyed being transformed into a shemale.

Well I had never come across a cap centered around a woman transforming.  Sure there were women on the opposite side of a role reversal or body swap, but these stories/caps were always about the guy getting transformed.  I enjoy challenges, and found this idea to be challenging.  Yes I hadn't been capping for long (about 2 days?), but I was already getting comfortable writing about how a guy transformed into a woman.  Now I had a new set of ideas to work with.

My first problem is that I don't enjoy much shemale imagery.  I enjoy the IDEA of shemales, and even transforming into one (kind of like the 'halfway' point of a male to female transformation), but I just didn't like many of the images.  I looked around a bit, but didn't find anything to spark an idea in me.  So I went back to her folder and saw that she had some images to cap from.  I found the above image and liked the idea of two shemales going at it with a woman.  And hey.... that woman could be her boyfriend!  That idea was enough to get the juices flowing.

The first thing I had to do was change the background.   This image was originally on a white background, and I really don't like images on white backgrounds.  I know I know, I used it in Exec to Sec, but that really cemented my dislike for white backgrounds.  So I pulled the image into Photoshop.  Now I'm good with Photoshop, but you can only do so much with a small resolution image.  I got it fairly clean, but when I went to add a background color you could see some white edging around the drawing.  I could have cleaned it up by just using a brush eraser over the drawing, but it would have taken a little while (a lot shorter than properly pathing out what i wanted, and deleting the rest, but long nonetheless).  So I decided to just throw a glow around the image.  I think the effect is nice.

So now that I had the image set, I went on to writing.  I hate to admit it, but I really don't remember the writing process.  I know I started with Vicki (in full shemale form), her boyfriend (in female form) and a 'stranger' in the end image, but I don't know what got me to put them in a bar, or use rings, or any other details.

I am happy with the cap as a whole.  I still think the story is lacking, and it didn't get much response on the Haven beyond Vicki saying she enjoyed it..... but it seems to be a good mesh between the story and the details.

One problem I see in it (and I still have the same problem) is vocabulary.  There are times I would like to talk about male genitalia but not sound obviously 'dirty'.  I know that I can always go to the good old standby of 'Cock' but I find that word to be a 'dirty' word.  When Vicky noticed she was sporter one of her own, I was left with a calmer moment, so Cock wouldn't fit.  Penis just seems a little anatomical/medical.

Now with female anatomy I like the three fold words; vagina, pussy, cunt.  Vagina is technical and medically proper.  Pussy is nice and soft (dirty, but not really dirty).  Cunt is dirty and powerful.  With these three words I can mention someones unmentionables and conjure up what I want.  Penis and Cock are just missing that center dirty but not to dirty term.