Saturday, December 4, 2010

A Threesome?

My first cap involving a woman changing into a shemale

This is still an early cap.  I had made caps for two members at the Haven, and instead of writing another 'out of thin air' cap, I decided to pick someone else to cap for.  As I still didn't know anyone at the Haven, I decided to pick someone who welcomed me in; Vicki.  It really helps that I find that name Vicki to be sexy.  Then I found something that I hadn't even considered.... Vicki is a female.  Not a woman trapped in a man's body, not a post op special..... a woman.  Her preferences indicated she enjoyed being transformed into a shemale.

Well I had never come across a cap centered around a woman transforming.  Sure there were women on the opposite side of a role reversal or body swap, but these stories/caps were always about the guy getting transformed.  I enjoy challenges, and found this idea to be challenging.  Yes I hadn't been capping for long (about 2 days?), but I was already getting comfortable writing about how a guy transformed into a woman.  Now I had a new set of ideas to work with.

My first problem is that I don't enjoy much shemale imagery.  I enjoy the IDEA of shemales, and even transforming into one (kind of like the 'halfway' point of a male to female transformation), but I just didn't like many of the images.  I looked around a bit, but didn't find anything to spark an idea in me.  So I went back to her folder and saw that she had some images to cap from.  I found the above image and liked the idea of two shemales going at it with a woman.  And hey.... that woman could be her boyfriend!  That idea was enough to get the juices flowing.

The first thing I had to do was change the background.   This image was originally on a white background, and I really don't like images on white backgrounds.  I know I know, I used it in Exec to Sec, but that really cemented my dislike for white backgrounds.  So I pulled the image into Photoshop.  Now I'm good with Photoshop, but you can only do so much with a small resolution image.  I got it fairly clean, but when I went to add a background color you could see some white edging around the drawing.  I could have cleaned it up by just using a brush eraser over the drawing, but it would have taken a little while (a lot shorter than properly pathing out what i wanted, and deleting the rest, but long nonetheless).  So I decided to just throw a glow around the image.  I think the effect is nice.

So now that I had the image set, I went on to writing.  I hate to admit it, but I really don't remember the writing process.  I know I started with Vicki (in full shemale form), her boyfriend (in female form) and a 'stranger' in the end image, but I don't know what got me to put them in a bar, or use rings, or any other details.

I am happy with the cap as a whole.  I still think the story is lacking, and it didn't get much response on the Haven beyond Vicki saying she enjoyed it..... but it seems to be a good mesh between the story and the details.

One problem I see in it (and I still have the same problem) is vocabulary.  There are times I would like to talk about male genitalia but not sound obviously 'dirty'.  I know that I can always go to the good old standby of 'Cock' but I find that word to be a 'dirty' word.  When Vicky noticed she was sporter one of her own, I was left with a calmer moment, so Cock wouldn't fit.  Penis just seems a little anatomical/medical.

Now with female anatomy I like the three fold words; vagina, pussy, cunt.  Vagina is technical and medically proper.  Pussy is nice and soft (dirty, but not really dirty).  Cunt is dirty and powerful.  With these three words I can mention someones unmentionables and conjure up what I want.  Penis and Cock are just missing that center dirty but not to dirty term.

2 comments:

  1. I don't know, I think "cock" is the middle term, "man-meat" or "fuck-tool" are the dirty ones *giggle*

    Seriously though, I know what you meant by that. I've run into the same thing when writing. There are times when "cock" just isn't appropriate, and neither is penis. "Dick" works, but again isn't quite the same as pussy. I think it is all the hard consonants, it just brings a harshness that you may not want.

    All in all, a great cap though.

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  2. I really like the shemale and female to shemale angles. Also, the implied mental change of the man. Great job!

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