I replied again with ""Petra... you heard the woman. Keep a cappin, or I'll use that paddle and brush and my bare hands on YOUR bottom! Wait.. that probably won't work. Keep a cappin or I WON"T use my bare hands on your bottom! Don't worry Steffie... I got yer back!"
Steffie replied with "Hold on a second, it seems like I'm not doin this right. I make the caps and Petra gets all the fun. Don't I deserve to be punished too?"
And that is how this cap was born.
It was supposed to be a quick and funny cap, but as is normal it got a bit out of hand. I read through it a couple of times, but didn't want to take any of the story out. The one part that probably could have gone is the whole neighbor's house... but those neighbors were all other people that comment in this thread, so I wanted to keep them in.
it's good you didn't change the story, it's wonderful as it is. Quite funny and the picture goes with it. Honestly didn't even need the picture, the story was that good.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Simone, it's such a cute and sexy story. It was organic and I really enjoy the way you finished it.
ReplyDeleteThis is a great story, a simple and convincing idea and beautifully written! Thank you!
ReplyDeleteYou know I loved this Caitlyn, and I think it's funny how something for me lead to Steffie getting a spanking. *giggle* She's a lucky girl.
ReplyDeleteOnce again, this is a perfect reason for people to make more comments in others captions.
ReplyDeleteOften, the comments can be just as good as the captions, and many times leads to more captions.
I know Petra does the same thing, that sometimes when we see a comment made, we'll make the commenter a caption just because their reply was so much fun, or sparked an caption idea that just NEEDED to be made.
That is part of the fun of the Haven, that back and forth with others in a playful manner. Perhaps its an inside joke sometimes, but those often are the ones that hit the most buttons for the recipients.
You are all very funny, you know that?
ReplyDelete"Petra had asked politely for Shysteffie to continue her cap (Her exact words were: "You MUST continue this. If you do not, there will be dire consequences. I'll have to use the paddle AND the hair brush on your bottom")"
ReplyDeleteWhen I read this I thought, I wonder why Steffie had not shaved her bums like I told her too. Oh well, at least she'll have a new 'do.
@Sasha -- Hahahahahahahahaha! You are such an airhead sometimes ;D
ReplyDeleteI love the fact that silly comments were the basis of this cap. Things that sprout up like that are often the best. Great work Caitlyn.